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Dedication to David Russel

BY: SINCERE

(WWW.TWITTER.COM/GORGEOUS_DEV)

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Dedication to David Russel
Invisible I Am
The words to a forgotten soul….
inside my heart writes a story
that forever remains untold;
As the clock of life continues to tick
My heart pumps the lonliest blood
im seeking for the love of my father
but you provide the loneliest love;
Remincising on childhood memories
pondering on thinqs ii could of did wrong
But within the blink of an eye you were qone
Tears trickle down when ii think of the stories you told me
And the way you picked me up,and use to hold me
The foundation of my life continues to crumble
You dissappearance is like nails in my life that continue to make me stumble
I sometimes remember the way you tucked me in my sheets
And the qlare in your eyes when you watched me sleep
This dream turned into a
Niqhtmare thats has kept me up for years
as ii swim in sorrow created by my tears.
Invisible I Am…..
Ill remember your mistakes that taught me valueable lessons
to make me a better man
Im still a forgotten soul
Invisble I Am….

Dedication to my Father:
David Russel
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29 Comments

  • Comment by A-FACE! — July 2, 2009 @ 7:18 pm

    awwwww this is good!! im proud of you Devieee
    but fxck that nxgga you dnt need him “im daddy” LMAOOO jkjk ily
    but nah for realsss you my boyyy and im always here for you man so no stress
    ily

  • Comment by SugaHunny — July 2, 2009 @ 7:25 pm

    awwwwww i lyk iht babes i lyk how u xpressd uhr feelin ihm here 4 u cusz i dnt have a father eitha :-*

  • Comment by titi — July 2, 2009 @ 7:33 pm

    damn dis is deep
    i feel u on dis . ..

  • Comment by Zee — July 2, 2009 @ 7:39 pm

    Omg this is very touching & deep, i sometimes feel the same way about my father, =/ but i hope you learn from his wrongs & do right.

  • Comment by EDEN — July 2, 2009 @ 8:05 pm

    wow that poem almost brung tearszx to my eyes that was really good deadasszx

  • Comment by rugby92b — July 2, 2009 @ 8:51 pm

    Wow this is gud ur expressing somthing that affects u ,,,,, very deep

  • Comment by GeNeSiiS — July 2, 2009 @ 8:55 pm

    This is really good, && i Could picture everything you wrote :)
    You wrote thiissss lols J.K
    BEAUTIFUL Poem <3

  • Comment by UniqueMiSFiT. — July 2, 2009 @ 8:59 pm

    “My heart pumps the lonliest blood
    im seeking for the love of my father
    but you provide the loneliest love”

    It would flow better if in the middle line you didnt use the word love , cause it sounds weird saying love twice. try putting a different word , like affection or fondness or something.

    My heart pumps the loneliest blood
    I’m seeking for the affection of my father
    but you provide the loneliest love.

    besides that , i like it.

  • Comment by Casandra — July 2, 2009 @ 9:16 pm

    Awwwwww… Dats a Nice Poem…… Its Really Deep…. I Kno Yuh Wrote It Frm Da Heart……

  • Comment by Raviie . — July 2, 2009 @ 9:32 pm

    ommmgggg DeviiN
    diis iis gr8 punk .
    ii luv iiht |*&&*| iiht really made mhe thiink ::
    like damn ii even had a bit ov a tear fall .

  • Comment by KGC. — July 2, 2009 @ 10:24 pm

    this is deep D.
    i aint know yuh was a poet
    aw its nice .

    KGC.

  • Comment by AshleyB. — July 2, 2009 @ 10:26 pm

    ahhh, i feel you on this one :-/

  • Comment by jennifer-chelsea — July 2, 2009 @ 10:51 pm

    wow….. realli diz iz an amazing poem… u were truly blessed wit a gift …. u betta take advantage of it lolz nah but d.a. datz a beautiful poem u had me tearin up once again

  • Comment by nicki — July 2, 2009 @ 10:52 pm

    awwwww itsz nice
    soundsz very genuine && from the heart =]

  • Comment by L E X i i — July 3, 2009 @ 3:29 am

    Yeooww shun dis poem is madddd Deep && kinda sadd But, NiCE. [Ganqsta`) i LOVED it. Dats all i have 2 say is i LOVED it!!

  • Comment by TEE-TEE — July 3, 2009 @ 9:32 am

    THIS IS SO000O0O00O FUXXXIN AMZAIN :) ))))))))))))))))))))))))
    II LOOVEEE YOUUU DEVINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

  • Comment by LiiVii — July 3, 2009 @ 11:43 am

    u asked 4 my comment so here it go…. –
    ima tell u the same thing i tol u da 1st time u made me read it way bac wen….. LOVEE IT DEV! love em all & u alreadi noe dat!.. t2ul Mr.Cobbs!

  • Comment by Tisha — July 3, 2009 @ 10:27 pm

    Nice poem..You got mad skills..You inspire me to write poetry again..lol..But yea I wrote you before n told u that u touch my heart with that poem..Keep it up

  • Comment by KEISHA — July 3, 2009 @ 11:25 pm

    THISS IS AMAZINGG
    II NEVER KNEWW YUH COULD WRITE POEMSSS
    YOUR THE GREATESTTT

  • Comment by Ulyssa — July 3, 2009 @ 11:28 pm

    “This dream turned into a Niqhtmare thats has kept me up for years” alot of meaninq !

    Deep_

  • Comment by ADDICTED2FASHiON — July 4, 2009 @ 10:20 am

    PERFECttt
    THiS IS AMAZIINNGGGG

  • Comment by MADEiNPARiSS — July 4, 2009 @ 10:21 am

    IM IN LOVE WITH YOU DEVINNN
    THIS IS THE BEST THING II EVER RREADD

    HAPPY 4TH OF JULY EVERYONEE
    ON HOUSEOFAURA.COM

  • Comment by >>>Chanel — July 4, 2009 @ 1:02 pm

    Damn Devin. Dhat shyt was deep. I aint noe yhu culd write lyke dhat, Im mad surprised. Bhut don’t feel bad cuz yhu doiinq biq thiinqz witout hym. Keep ya head uhp boii. LOLZ

  • Comment by JAY-LEE THA BADDEST BITXH — July 4, 2009 @ 2:47 pm

    IMMA MARRRRY YUHHH
    II LOVE THE WAY YOU USE YOUR WORDSS
    YOUR JUST THE BEST :)

    OFF TO MY COOKOUTS BYEEE
    LOVE YOU DEV

  • Comment by Badd_Uno_Bri — July 4, 2009 @ 2:57 pm

    Your amazinqqqqqq!
    if only you were minessss =]

  • Comment by Jaz — July 4, 2009 @ 3:04 pm

    u alreadyyy snoo i luv ya poemss babe =]
    future hubby

  • Comment by yea — July 4, 2009 @ 9:53 pm

    toughen da fukk up! u alwayzzz been n is a fukkin pussy

  • Comment by NAY TAY — July 5, 2009 @ 10:19 am

    THIS NIKKA IS A HATER ABOVE ME
    THIS IS GREAT AND II KNOW YUH MAKING YA MOMS
    AND POPS PROUD
    GIRLS LIKE NIGGER LIKE YOU
    THATS EXACTLY WHY YOU GOT SO MUCH COMMENTS
    AND HE PROBABLY SOME BROKE NIGGER
    THAT DONT DO SHIT FOR A LIVING
    BUT HATE ON NIGGERS N SUCKK MAD DDICK
    FUCKING FAGGOT!!!!!!!!

  • Comment by Honey_Diip — July 6, 2009 @ 4:50 pm

    letsssssssss get married.

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